So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

View previous topic View next topic Go down

So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Riu on Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:43 pm

It was late.
The only thing illuminating the room were the pale fingers of moonlight filtering in through the curtains and the stark, glowing embers of the digital clock. I was resting peacefully, my breaths deep and slow.
But suddenly my eyes flicked open.
It took a moment for my eyes to adjust to the low light level, but soon I was able to make out a shape in the darkness. There was a grotesque, hunched figure at the foot of my bed.
It was crouching on the ground, staring up at me wordlessly. Its head was unnaturally large, and its eyes even bigger. The pale, pallid skin was stretched taut across its emaciated frame, and it appeared to be naked. Worst of all, though, were its hands, or rather, claws. They had but three digits, and they were massive, deadly-sharp claws.
It stared at me.
And stared.
Its eyes were little more than gigantic white circles, they possessed neither pupils nor irises. Just horrendous bleached disks.
I couldn't move. My muscles turned to stone. My breath caught in my throat and wouldn't be moved. My brain ceased functioning normally and nothing was left but unimaginable fear.
Long moments passed. Or minutes. Or hours. I didn't even know anymore.
Finally the creature opened its mouth, revealing rows of irregular, sharpened teeth.
An unearthly screech issued forth, a sound like I had never heard before. It was terrible and awesome. It carried power and terror and evil. My ears rang from the sound, and my vision went black. The scream echoed on and I lost consciousness.

I awoke the next morning feeling groggy and disoriented. Only moments after awaking, however, memories of the previous night flooded my brain.
The thing had spoken to me in it's terrible voice.
It had told me its name.
It was the rake
It was the rake
it was the rake
itwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwasthe rakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwa stherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherake itwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwasthe rakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwa stherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherake itwastherakeitwastherakeitwastherake
THE RAKE
THE RAKE
THE RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE
*begins flailing his arms and foaming out the mouth, then faints*
__________________
avatar
Riu
Admin

Male Number of posts : 15204
Age : 22
Location : My car WOOO
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Crooked on Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:55 pm

You should perform this in front of a lot of people. It's very poetic.
avatar
Crooked
Professional Hugger
Professional Hugger

Male Number of posts : 861
Age : 23
Location : 渋谷川
Registration date : 2011-04-04

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Riu on Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:00 pm

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Rake

This is what it's based off of.
avatar
Riu
Admin

Male Number of posts : 15204
Age : 22
Location : My car WOOO
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Crooked on Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:13 pm

That picture really makes me want to avoid reading any further.
avatar
Crooked
Professional Hugger
Professional Hugger

Male Number of posts : 861
Age : 23
Location : 渋谷川
Registration date : 2011-04-04

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Riu on Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:17 pm

It's poorly written, and more or less identical in terms of creepiness to what I wrote.
Only longer.
avatar
Riu
Admin

Male Number of posts : 15204
Age : 22
Location : My car WOOO
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by book of life on Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:32 pm

Eh, I'll this chair here instead.
avatar
book of life
Ultimate Teddybear
Ultimate Teddybear

Male Number of posts : 2285
Age : 28
Location : Somewhere, probably sleeping or working.
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Riu on Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:52 pm

Okay.
What?
avatar
Riu
Admin

Male Number of posts : 15204
Age : 22
Location : My car WOOO
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by book of life on Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:53 am

It's me being so clever that no one gets it, is all. '3'
avatar
book of life
Ultimate Teddybear
Ultimate Teddybear

Male Number of posts : 2285
Age : 28
Location : Somewhere, probably sleeping or working.
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by NS on Mon Jan 23, 2012 6:45 pm

...the hell?

_________________


My Youtube Profile|PM me for my MSN!|Janne Da Arc - Dry?
avatar
NS
God of Hugs
God of Hugs

Male Number of posts : 6368
Age : 23
Location : Broton
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by NS on Mon Jan 23, 2012 6:45 pm

That referred to pretty much everything on this thread by the way

_________________


My Youtube Profile|PM me for my MSN!|Janne Da Arc - Dry?
avatar
NS
God of Hugs
God of Hugs

Male Number of posts : 6368
Age : 23
Location : Broton
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Riu on Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:53 pm

I WROTE A CREEPYPASTA
GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT
avatar
Riu
Admin

Male Number of posts : 15204
Age : 22
Location : My car WOOO
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Ema Skye on Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:59 pm

YES
well not really

_________________
avatar
Ema Skye
Admin

Female Number of posts : 6176
Age : 25
Location : Hogwarts
Registration date : 2008-12-14

Back to top Go down

Re: So I wrote this in about 10 minutes for the lulz

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum